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Here is a new song called "Can I?". It's actually a remake of a song I released as a "B Side" to a song called "Can You?" about 18 years ago. At that time, I was told this song was the epitome of a perfect synthpop ballad. I completely re-recorded and gave it a face lift as well as added acoustic and electric guitar.

Before anyone disses the autotune, I didn't need it, but I wanted to stay true to the sound / genre of the song. I've already been told I didn't need it, so I may go back in and remove it...haven't decided yet.

Anyway, here it is: https://soundcloud.com/gregg-hart/can-i-version-2
Last edited by gregghart on Tue Aug 06, 2019 12:09 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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by Bbd on Sun Aug 04, 2019 8:48 am
I liked the song and production. Good lyrics too.

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by scottyo7 on Mon Aug 05, 2019 3:17 pm
I really like how you build and introduce the instrument layers and then decrement them on the outro.
Good production also... the bass area really grabs you.

For me I struggled a bit to understand all the vocals*.
But this is a sappy love song 8-) (I've heard lots and written a few) so the story-line lyrics were somewhat 'predictable'.
I'd say the vox need to be a tad louder, some different EQ, less effects, etc.?

*I come from the camp that if you have vocals they should be up front. ;)

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by gregghart on Tue Aug 06, 2019 12:09 pm
Thanks. I updated the link above to the newer version of the song that address some of the issues you were talking about.

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