Only bumping this because I have realised that i hadn't really explained what this was all about, and people were probably scratching their heads over it

Basically, it's the remembrance of a overnight journey I once took, sitting in the lit carriage of an express train rattling it's way through the night, and I was kind of sleepy and kind of hypnotised by the sounds of the train making its way along the track, and by the occasional lights, and the longer lit platforms that flashed past.

Don't know if I explained that very well at all - at least not the feeling of the experience. I got some of the inspiration for it after having listened to TD's track LOART.

And yes, there is yet work to be done on it - as always

I like what I'm hearing so far! I think you explained very well. I like the panning and phase thing you've got going on. I think this will develop nicely no matter what you decide to add.