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Thanks in advance for listening.
This song has been a while in the making. Short background is that an old friend of mine realized I was making music again, and had a song idea. We worked together crafting that idea into a song, with me providing the music and some lyrical contributions, and her providing the vocal talent.
I'm looking for any and all feedback, as I don't have a ton of experience mixing and producing whatever genre this is, ha ha.
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by scottyo7 on Tue May 11, 2021 7:01 pm
Wow, I really like this.
I'm glad I finally found this - sorry no one else has got to enjoy it yet. ;)
Nicely arranged and the lyrics tell a nice story... plus she is a quality singer!

To me, the vox and snare sound fine but the piano/Rhodes and other drums could use some mid-high (1800-4000Hz) sparkle?

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by sunlove on Sun May 16, 2021 12:40 pm
Nicely produced, very good elements in your songs. If I may just say something, the lyrics a little too compressed and need some de-essing here and there. The devil might in the details but you won't sell your soul by doing so.

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by danielowen on Mon May 31, 2021 5:59 pm
I really liked this! Personally, I would love to perhaps hear a little more verb or delay on the vocals...just to give it a bit more "air". But that's just being nitpicking - quality song, recording and mixing.
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by markbuster on Tue Jun 01, 2021 7:25 pm
Thanks very much to all who listened and commented! Very helpful feedback and much appreciated. Anyone who wants to listen to the final version can find it on Spotify (and other streaming services of course).
I think it's OK to post a link? We'll see...

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