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Hi musicians.

After decades (and I mean decades...) without touching the guitar and the keyboard I started again having fun with my passion: Composing instrumental music.

I'm a newbie using Studio One 3.5 and a lot of sound that I'd like to hear are not there yet... but still..is a start.

This is the link of this song, remembering my father.
Guitar kick in at 2;23

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xeZUvL1JcKg

Regards

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by bjornfredrickson on Sun Nov 04, 2018 12:19 am
That's a really nice song. I could feel the emotion coming through especially the guitar part.
Seemed to me like there's a lot of right hand piano - all those eighth notes - and not much left hand accompaniment. Just my impression.
It's a beautiful piece of music. Have you thought of putting lyrics to it?

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by scottyo7 on Sun Nov 04, 2018 3:36 am
Quite nice.
I'm a sucker for power chords underlying 'mellower' songs.

I'm not sure I could play guitar like that after letting my callouses go soft. ;)

I've laid off the guitar a lot over the last 2 years as I wrote about 30 near complete songs 2-3 years ago in a previouse band. Since it was 'democratic' these were not chosen. So I've been working on my 'back catalogue to arrange and finish them - cuz I like them.

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by jpsbuk on Sun Nov 04, 2018 5:45 am
Nice tune and I can understand the emotion behind it. For me the strings sounded a little 'thin' perhaps and could benefit from some reverb and more dynamics? There's also a bit of a guitar 'glitch' at 3.27 ??

Just my amateur views though :)

Thanks for sharing.

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by Bbd on Sun Nov 04, 2018 9:03 am
Really nice melody and feel. It has a lot of emotion in it.

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by Skip Jones on Sun Nov 04, 2018 11:53 am
Let me be the first to mention not only nice audio but nice integration with video. My only critique is as strings increased in volume they seem to exhibit pumping. Easily smoothed out with a little tweaking, but just my. 02.

Musicians don't stop, they only hit " Pause,".

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by ernestomartire on Sun Nov 11, 2018 3:27 pm
Thank you all guys for your feedback! really appreciated.
For some reason I did not got the email informing about your answers... I got only the last one...

Sorry to answer so late but I was Daddy-sitting my "little" kids for about three weeks.

I'm working in a couple of songs, and when ready, I'll post it to have your feedback.

Hugs

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