Hi, the attached video is of a song I wrote and the recording is just a demo or more of an elaborate idea track really. Excuse the actual video, I sometimes have fun tinkering around with video editing software

I'm interested in reading any comments you guys have that can be directed towards the song itself (rather than the mix quality) or how the style and writing play together. I do plan on fleshing it out more and having drums added towards the end of the year.

Thanks!