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I'm seeking constructive criticism of my mix & master for this song. I appreciate any suggestions to help me improve. Thanks!

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Last edited by ksmason on Wed Oct 31, 2018 1:07 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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by Black_Haus on Wed Oct 31, 2018 12:56 pm
Not much to criticize here. Nice work

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by ksmason on Wed Oct 31, 2018 6:27 pm
Black_Haus wroteNot much to criticize here. Nice work

Black Haus, thanks for taking time to check out the track.

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by timmorris on Thu Nov 01, 2018 3:40 pm
Hi dude ...nice song...good recording and mix.

For my own taste I would have a little less reverb on the vocal, and probably a shorter acoustic part...otherwise really cool/// :D

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by ksmason on Sat Nov 03, 2018 10:26 am
timmorris wroteHi dude ...nice song...good recording and mix.

For my own taste I would have a little less reverb on the vocal, and probably a shorter acoustic part...otherwise really cool/// :D

timmorris, I really appreciate your suggestions and thanks for checking out the track :)

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by Bbd on Sun Nov 04, 2018 10:49 am
Beautiful sound! Good job.
I agree that maybe too much verb on the lead vocal. Like it on the flute.
She's got a nice voice. I think there are some pitch issues at times. "Crying" might be a hair flat overall. Some other words too.
In the break, I would drop the bass too.

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by ksmason on Thu Nov 08, 2018 6:24 pm
Bbd wroteBeautiful sound! Good job.
I agree that maybe too much verb on the lead vocal. Like it on the flute.
She's got a nice voice. I think there are some pitch issues at times. "Crying" might be a hair flat overall. Some other words too.
In the break, I would drop the bass too.


Bbd, thanks for your observations and very useful suggestions. It is much appreciated! :D

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